Short Fiction · Chapter
A Fog in Santone explained
On a foggy night in San Antonio, two terminally ill men—Goodall of Memphis and Hurd of Toledo—meet on a bridge and bond over their shared mortality.
What happens
On a foggy night in San Antonio, two terminally ill men—Goodall of Memphis and Hurd of Toledo—meet on a bridge and bond over their shared mortality. Hurd proposes a drunken spree as a quicker route to death, and they drink heavily at a bar. Goodall later encounters a young woman, Miss Rosa, who comforts him and urges him to live. The fog symbolizes the pervasive threat of death hanging over the city's three thousand invalids.
Themes in this chapter
Deception and Appearance vs. Reality
The city's promotional claims of pure ozone and health are contrasted with the deadly fog and the suffering of the invalids, highlighting the gap between appearance and reality.
Humor and Irony
The bartender's automated recitation of San Antonio's health benefits, the ironic 'freemasonry' of coughing invalids, and Hurd's darkly comic plan to die in a hack all underscore the story's ironic tone.
Ambition and Failure
The invalids' failed quest for health and life in San Antonio, and their resort to self-destructive measures, reflect the theme of ambition thwarted by inevitable failure.
Characters to notice
- Unknown Narrator
The narrator describes the fog, the invalids, and the encounters between Goodall, Hurd, and Miss Rosa.
- Tom Hopkins
Referred to as 'Goodall of Memphis'; a young man with pulmonary tuberculosis who contemplates suicide but is persuaded by Miss Rosa to seek life.
- The Captain
Referred to as 'Hurd of Toledo'; a middle-aged man with catarrhal bronchitis who advocates for a drunken spree to hasten death.
- Maggie Toole
Referred to as 'Miss Rosa'; a young woman who comforts Goodall, kisses him, and encourages him to live.
Key passages
“Purest atmosphere, sir, on earth! You might think from the river winding through our town that we are malarial, but, no, sir! Repeated experiments made both by the Government and local experts show that our air contains nothing deleterious—nothing but ozone, sir, pure ozone.”
The city's boosters claim the air is perfectly healthy, despite the river, citing official tests that prove only beneficial ozone is present.
This promotional speech is repeated mechanically by locals, contrasting with the deadly fog that actually afflicts the invalids.
“A cough is your card; a hemorrhage a letter of credit.”
Among the tubercular patients, a cough serves as an introduction, and a hemorrhage as proof of one's condition.
This metaphor highlights the grim camaraderie and shared mortality of the 'Three Thousand' invalids.
“The music tears the breasts of the seekers after Nepenthe, inciting Toledo to remark: 'Those kids of mine—I wonder—by God, Mr. Goodall of Memphis, we had too little of that whiskey! No slow music in mine, if you please. It makes you disremember to forget.'”
The sad guitar music disturbs Hurd, reminding him of his children and making him want more whiskey to numb his pain; he prefers fast music that helps him forget rather than remember.
This shows Hurd's struggle to escape his thoughts through alcohol, and the irony that 'Nepenthe' (a mythical drug for sorrow) is sought but elusive.