Short Fiction · Chapter
IV: She Beholds the Attractive Stranger explained
The narrator resumes her journal after a dull winter, focusing on Caroline's future with M.
What happens
The narrator resumes her journal after a dull winter, focusing on Caroline's future with M. de la Feste. Caroline writes to him to fix their wedding date, but he delays his visit until May. When he finally arrives, the narrator feels agitated and notices his lingering gazes. During a walk in Wherryborne Wood, she deliberately leaves the couple alone, but M. de la Feste follows her instead, and they wander together for over an hour while Caroline returns home alone. The narrator is disturbed by his lack of effort to find Caroline and by his flattering words to her.
Themes in this chapter
Love and Marriage
Caroline's engagement to M. de la Feste is central; the chapter explores delays, expectations, and the emotional strain of waiting.
Deception and Secrecy
The narrator hides her agitation and does not fully disclose her feelings about M. de la Feste's attentions, even in her private journal.
Isolation and Longing
The narrator feels isolated in her emotional turmoil, longing for clarity while Caroline remains blissfully unaware.
Characters to notice
- Caroline
The narrator's sister, betrothed to M. de la Feste; she writes to him to fix the wedding date and prepares her trousseau, but grows heartsick over his delays.
- Charles de la Feste
Caroline's fiancé, a man of genius; he arrives later than expected, shows attentiveness to the narrator, and seems less eager to reunite with Caroline during the wood walk.
- Christine Everard
The narrator of the journal, Caroline's sister; she feels agitated and perturbed by M. de la Feste's attention and her own reactions.
Key passages
“I am so agitated I can scarcely write, and yet am particularly impelled to do so before leaving my room.”
The narrator is too flustered to write but feels compelled to record her feelings before leaving her room.
Reveals her emotional turmoil upon M. de la Feste's unexpected arrival.
“I was so foolish as to show a little perturbation—I cannot tell why I did not control myself; and I think he noticed that I was not cool.”
She admits she showed her unease and suspects he noticed her lack of composure.
Highlights her self-awareness and growing anxiety about her feelings.