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Dougald Anson returns to Krakenau to find the city dark and under siege.

What happens

Dougald Anson returns to Krakenau to find the city dark and under siege. He is ambushed by royal guardsmen but rescued by Janazik, who reveals that Prince Volakech has led a revolt. Anson learns that his father and brother Jamie have been killed, and his sister Ellen is missing. He joins a group of survivors hiding in a cellar, including his sisters Joan and Nora, and Masefield Philip.

Themes in this chapter

  • Honor vs. Survival

    Anson fights for survival against overwhelming odds, while the survivors in the cellar prioritize stealth and secrecy over open resistance.

  • Power and Corruption

    Prince Volakech's revolt and the betrayal of the royal guardsmen illustrate the corrupting influence of power and the fragility of political order.

Characters to notice

  • Dougald Anson

    Returns to Krakenau, fights off attackers, learns of his father's and brother's deaths, and searches for Ellen.

  • Janazik

    Rescues Anson from an ambush and leads him to a hiding place, revealing Volakech's revolt.

  • Joan

    Anson's sister, present in the cellar, confirms the deaths of their father and brother.

  • Nora

    Anson's sister, married to Gonzales Alonzo, present in the cellar.

  • Philip

    Masefield Philip, brother of Ellen, present in the cellar, does not know Ellen's whereabouts.

  • Gonzales Alonzo

    Present in the cellar with his wife Nora.

  • Ellen

    Masefield Ellen, missing and unaccounted for after the revolt.

Key passages

  • dim-lit hollowness. Joan and Nora sprang forward as if to touch their brother, make sure he was alive and no vision of the night, but Janazik waved them back with his sword. “No noise,” hissed the Khazaki’s fierce whisper. “No noise, by all the thirteen hells! Volakech’s burats are all over the city. If a patrol finds us⁠—” “Ellen!” Anson’s blue eyes searched for Masefield Philip, crouched near the lamp. “Where’s your sister, Phil?” “I don’t know,” whispered the boy. “We’re all who seem to’ve escaped. They may have caught her⁠—I don’t know⁠—” “Father.” Joan’s voice caught with a dry sob. “Anse, Father and Jamie are dead. The rebels killed them.”

    In a dimly lit cellar, Joan and Nora rush to touch their brother Anson, but Janazik silences them, warning that Volakech's soldiers patrol the city. Anson asks Philip about his sister Ellen, but Philip doesn't know her fate. Joan then reveals that their father and brother Jamie have been killed by the rebels.

    Reveals the immediate aftermath of the revolt and the personal losses suffered by Anson's family.

  • his brain told him bleakly: This is all. You’re finished. No lone Earthling ever stood up long to more than two Khazaki. But he hardly noticed. Suddenly there were only two in front of him. He darted forth from the wall, his sword crashing down with all the power of his huge body behind it. The warrior tried to skip aside⁠—too late. The tremendous blow smashed his own parry down and sang in his skull-bones. And the last of the attackers died.

    Anson realizes he is outnumbered and likely doomed, but he fights on, killing the remaining two attackers with a powerful blow.

    Highlights Anson's combat prowess and determination in the face of overwhelming odds.

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