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XXII explained

Vance and Laura Lou enjoy two idyllic days by the sea, but Laura Lou's cough forces them to return to New York.

What happens

Vance and Laura Lou enjoy two idyllic days by the sea, but Laura Lou's cough forces them to return to New York. Vance takes her to a hotel, a restaurant, and a performance of Romeo and Juliet, where Laura Lou is moved to tears. The next day, Vance visits The Hour office, meets Eric Rauch, and discusses a contract for regular contributions, including a monthly article and an option on his entire output for three years. Frenside advises him to keep free. Vance is excited by the literary world but anxious about finances.

Themes in this chapter

  • Artistic Ambition and Creative Struggle

    Vance's desire to write a long poem is thwarted by his marriage and financial needs. He negotiates a contract that may limit his artistic freedom, as Frenside warns.

  • The Pursuit of Wealth and Success

    Vance calculates his potential income and is tempted by the Pulsifer Prize, illustrating the tension between art and commerce.

  • Love and Marriage

    Vance and Laura Lou's honeymoon is marked by romantic bliss but also by Laura Lou's illness and the financial strain of supporting her.

Characters to notice

  • Vance Weston

    Newly married, Vance is torn between artistic ambition and financial responsibility. He negotiates a contract with The Hour while trying to support Laura Lou.

  • Laura Lou

    Laura Lou's health is fragile; she coughs and is moved by Romeo and Juliet. She enjoys the honeymoon but remains dependent on Vance.

  • George Frenside

    Frenside warns Vance not to tie himself up too far ahead, advising him to keep free as long as he can.

  • Eric Rauch

    The assistant editor of The Hour, Rauch discusses the contract with Vance, praises his work, and introduces him to the literary scene.

  • Rebecca Stram

    A sculptress who meets Vance at the Coconut Tree and expresses interest in doing his head.

Key passages

  • For two more balmy days they lingered, ecstatic children, by the sea; but on the third the air freshened. Laura Lou began to cough, and Vance, frightened, packed up their possessions and carried her back to civilization.

    After two blissful days at the beach, Laura Lou's cough forces Vance to cut their honeymoon short and return to New York.

    Highlights Laura Lou's fragile health and Vance's protective response.

  • Keep free—keep free as long as you can, Frenside repeated, hobbling down with a heavy rap of his stick on each step.

    Frenside advises Vance not to commit to long-term contracts, emphasizing the importance of artistic independence.

    Foreshadows Vance's potential conflict between security and freedom.