# XII: “Averil’s Atonement” explained — Anne of the Island

> Chapter companion for Anne of the Island by L. M. Montgomery.

## What happens

Anne writes a story titled 'Averil’s Atonement', sharing it with Diana and Mr. Harrison for critique. Despite their feedback and her own revisions, the story is rejected by two magazines. Anne initially despairs over her literary ambitions but eventually resolves to focus on teaching after Redmond.

## Themes in this chapter

### Ambition and Career

Anne pursues her dream of becoming a published author, facing rejection and learning from criticism.

### Self-Discovery

Through writing and rejection, Anne discovers her limitations and re-evaluates her future path.

### Friendship

Diana’s unwavering support and Mr. Harrison’s blunt advice highlight the role of friends in Anne’s creative journey.

## Character check-ins

### Anne Shirley

Writes and revises her story 'Averil’s Atonement', receives rejections, and temporarily abandons literary ambitions.

### Diana Barry

Supports Anne’s writing, offers enthusiastic feedback, and names the character Robert Ray.

### Mr. Harrison

Critiques Anne’s story harshly, advises her to write about familiar people and places, and suggests she not give up writing.

### Gilbert Blythe

Anne tells him about the story but does not read it to him.

### Marilla Cuthbert

Unaware of Anne’s writing venture; Anne imagines reading the story to her.

## Key lines

> This is the end of my literary ambitions.

Anne declares she will stop writing stories after two rejections.

_Reflects Anne's initial despair and sense of finality._

> I wouldn't give up altogether... I'd write of people and places like I knew, and I'd make my characters talk everyday English.

Mr. Harrison advises Anne to write about familiar subjects and use natural dialogue.

_Key advice that influences Anne's later writing approach._

> You may name the little hired boy who lived with the Lesters.

Anne allows Diana to name a minor character in the story.

_Shows the collaborative and playful nature of their friendship._

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